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Well, it depends on whether or not he rigged the chandelier to fall (;

Thanks for sharing your opinion of the story! I'm always curious as to how readers will interpret what I write (:

I'm thankful for the feedback, but can you be a bit more specific about the "improper layout"? I'd really appreciate the clarification!

Thanks for the review, I'll take your suggestions into consideration. Merry Christmas to you too!

Much (:

The poem flows much better now, so kudos to you! BUT! The word "closed" is repeated two stanzas in a row, and just feels so bland! I apologize for being ...

Thank you for the mental image of your shocked face in all its glory (: I'm glad you think it's more than some teen-outcast pity-party.

I appreciate the enthusiasm!

I'm thrilled you like it! I wasn't sure what to expect from this poem, but I'm glad it seems to have an impact.

I'm glad you like it! And I totally get what you mean by it having the whole "bedside" feel.

It happens to the best of us (:

Thank you for the feedback!

I love it, except there's 6 syllables in the first line.

I'm glad you believe this poem to be open-ended, as that was my original intention. I don't believe you overthought the poem at all!

I never really thought about the ending. I was more focused on writing down what I saw in my mind's eye. But I give credit to both your interpretations, though ...