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jakobwrites

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Easter Eggs.

    Thank you for the tips ^^ I'll definitely go back and fix some things up!

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Child's Play

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    I was really hoping for this poem to rhyme. When the first stanza ended up not rhyming, the entire thing seemed to just have long metaphors. It was hard to ...

    Aug 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Moonlight

    Aug 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Easter Eggs.

    Hi! Thank you for your review, but however, I am not an 11 year old boy. As my profile says, I am a 13, almost 14 year old girl, who ...

    Aug 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: i loved you four hundred and seventy days

    Aug 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Humor, Dramatic Re: Plugged In, Not Charging

    This is so painfully relatable.

    Aug 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Wildflower (The Series)

    Thank you. When i write like this it comes quickly and I just put it the way I feel it, so I do tend to become inconsistent in capitalization and ...

    Jun 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Wildflower (The Series)

    Big things are all I'm hoping for. Have a great day!!

    Jun 20, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Wildflower (The Series)

    Thank you so much... it means a lot. Really. Have a wonderful day!

    Jun 20, 2014


Remember: the plot is nothing more than footprints left in the snow after your characters have run by on their way to incredible destinations.
— Ray Bradbury