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Hello! I loved your poem so much! It was very real in a way of showing that people have another side that not everyone sees. The last sentence of your ...

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This is a beautiful peice of poetry. Though it doesn’t describe how the daughter would be feeling, you can still feel it. The stanzas are great, and make the poem ...

Hello! This poem is beautiful. The whole time I was invisioning of a powerful beautiful women. The last sentence really made the whole poem. You really spot on defined a ...

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Hello Aaliyah, Overall I loved this poem. It had a lot of emotion and feeling that was put into it. It makes you feel something so close to home that ...

Thankyou very much for the feedback! I%u2019m glad you liked the poem and I will definetly keep writing and revising new poetry!

Hello Eros! Thankyou so much for the feedback and the advice! I will definetly put the poem in stanzas to make it look more organized, so thankyou for the reminder! ...

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