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Re: The little girl stays with me - Chapter Five
Hii!! Cate here, I am obsessed with your book! I can't wait until the next chapter. I don't think it was a good idea for you to publish this because ...
Apr 15, 2019 -
Re: Untangled (Chapter 1)Age 16 recomended
Hello! I am Cate here to give a review. From the few spelling errors and the short story. It was really good, maybe add some more detail, help the readers ...
Apr 15, 2019 -
Re: A weird story is a good story
Hello! I am Cate, here to give a review. For short stories I don't critique. Let me get into this, I loved this story. It made me laugh and smile ...
Apr 15, 2019 -
Re: Thanks to Mother Nature
Hello! I am Cate, giving you a review. I am not looking for problems in your book. I thought it was good The way you started it jumping into action ...
Apr 15, 2019 -
Re: Unknown Path ~ The two Worlds Prologue Miss Moon
Hello Cate here to give you a review. I am going to just get into this. So to start off you have a wonderful start to a great adventure. But ...
Apr 15, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 1
Hello, Cate here. I am reviewing your amazing chapter. So you have a ton of run on sentences. I know that others have told you that but that is something ...
Apr 15, 2019 -
Re: The Boy and His Wolf:Chapter.2 The Encounter.
HAIII!!! It's Cate here to review your amazing story! I read it and was like *Gasps* it was so good! I fell in love with Asher, she is such a ...
Apr 11, 2019 -
Re: The little girl stays with me - Chapter Four
Well to start off, I should have read the first chapter rather than starting in the middle. To be quite honest this was really good. Your way of writing is ...
Apr 10, 2019 -
Re: My girl Beggening of chapter 1
Hi. I think the story has a great start. And I am here to tell you that anything I say is to help you. So to start there are a ...
Apr 5, 2019 -
Re: Natural Painkillers
Hello. I first of all want to say this was so cute. I also want you to know that anything I say is to help. So when I first started ...
Apr 5, 2019