irishfire

HI DERE! Wow! I'm loving this script, its funny and interesting and you've sucked me in! Saw one thing though Kim sits at the kitchen table, her ehad in her ...

Hi there! So I think you have a pretty good story here but there are some suggestions about some things that jumped out at me, if you don't mind of ...

...HAHA! Good one :lol: That was really clever. To be honest I was a little scared to click on this because of the title but I'm glad I did, it ...

...W-O-E. :thud: That was epic, and shocking, and funny all at the same time. AWESOME JOB! I love the ducks hahaha. Keep up the awesome work! -Irish :elephant:

Hey there! First I want to say that I loved this! The description was beautiful and it reminded me of tons of books that I've read with the form of ...

Hey Teamate! Wow, that was so touching! I know exactly how you feel, I have younger cousins 2 around the age of 6 or 7 and one around the age ...

Haha, that was perfectly horrid! While I was reading this my sister came in and said "There are like 30 "borings" in that sentence." And left :smt005 I liked this! ...

Hey there! I liked this! The past and present mixing together and everything was great! I found one thing that seemed a little off to me though: She missed a ...

Hey PP! Wow, I can't wait for the 2nd part! You got me hooked :D I've been through exactly what you've mentioned and even given up on hundreds (yes hundreds) ...

AWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!! That was so touching!! I'm like crying :cry: That was beautiful! I definatly think you should continue it! *mops up tears with tissue* Beautiful just beautiful Keep up the ...

Hello again! :mrgreen: So, to start I really loved this story. It was so beautiful to me, so inspiring. Bravo! :smt001 The only things I saw were wrong was grammar ...

Hey there! I want to start with the fact that I think this is a pretty funny script! They all remind me of my friends and people I know, haha. ...

Wow, that was beautiful! So moving. Amazing job! :smt002 The only things I really noticed where a few gramatical things! :smt003 Your mouth is open, tihnk you are screaming so ...

Awwww, thats so sad. Poor Sherrie :cry: But I don't understand, did he do that only because she didn't want him to do that to her? Or was he faking ...

Lol nice. I think I should get some help if my charaters started talking to me... but you did good job with it! Keep up the awesome work! -Irish :elephant: