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Re: Irishfire
Oh my God! Forest thats beautiful :D Thank you so much! You've made my entire life Forest :lol: Thank you! Keep up the beautiful work! -Irish :elephant: :smt003 :smt003 :smt003
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Black Tears
Hey there, Irish here. Wow, thats really beautiful and sad. I love your imagery in it, but I'm not sure that I can really tell what happened.... Did he break ...
Dec 12, 2009 -
Re: Grownups know best.
Hey there! Irish in da hisouse! :wink: This was a cute story! Lol, I feel bad for poor Raghu, he didn't know any better. I saw a couple nitpicks though: ...
Dec 11, 2009 -
Re: This Day
Hey! Irish here! So I liked this, the emotion and everything, the ending was really sad :( I was hoping he would turn around and stay, haha. I saw a ...
Dec 10, 2009 -
Re: Sacrifice.
Oh my God thats beautiful! Not that its good that she killed herself but still, so sweet :) Awesome job, but its really short. I'd add maybe a little more ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: TigerGate
Hi there! I'm Irish, Welcome to YWS! :smt003 So, this was AWESOME! for a first post! I loved it! The suspense and the feeling you put into it, as well ...
Nov 22, 2009 -
Re: My Soul Cried for Sun - Prologue
Yo yo yo! I really liked this, even though it was short! I loved how you described how she was no longer interesting to them and such. Its not something ...
Nov 19, 2009 -
Re: One Life, Two Minds: a mother to be's bewildering nightmare
Hi there! Irish in da house! So first of all, I need to spazz about this. *jumps up and down squealing* I have a friend named Falon! I love that ...
Nov 16, 2009 -
Re: Drifting
Good Afternoon! Irish here! I thought this was really sweet and sad. I noticed two things though: “No, I’ve seen the good that’s come of it and it’s a lot ...
Nov 14, 2009 -
Re: The Devil Has Dimples (Prologue + Chapter 1)
Hey there! First of all, love the title! I thought the devil was going to be this little kid who had dimples, haha. Oo... *light bulb goes on* Idea! Anyway! ...
Nov 10, 2009 -
Re: My DreamWorld
Hi! The names Irish and I'm here to critque! *theme song* Anyway, *clicks off theme song* I liked this! The description behind was really great and so was the emotion! ...
Nov 8, 2009 -
Re: Wire Hearts and Paper Dreams (1)
Hi Nutty! I saw your name on this and jumped for it, and I'm really glad I did! I really like it! I can't wait to see more! Love you ...
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: I Always Wondered...
Hi Hi Hi! Well, not much to say about this since its so short but, I find it kinda funny that thats a constant question in my science class "Why ...
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Kissed pt.1
Hi there! I really like this! The elements added to it along with darkness and animals! I love all that stuff! Few things though: " Ah, Nyx, we did well ...
Nov 5, 2009 -
Re: "Dream Self" episode 5, part 1
Hi! Oh my God that was awesome! I loved this series! And I'm sorry for the caps but TED NO! WHY!?! I shall miss thee Ted :cry: But loved it! ...
Nov 2, 2009
