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Re: A Song of Exile - Chapter II: Still Heart
Thanks so much for your review! Yeah, and I did find that Cyra lacked motivation and this point and I've been trying to think of a clever way to develop ...
Aug 18, 2016 -
Re: A Song of Exile - Chapter II: Still Heart
thanks for the review! I'll be sure to go through your suggestions :) (and no, she isn't trying to kill the mouse, she's trying to practice a transfiguring spell. Sorry ...
Aug 18, 2016 -
Re: A Song of Exile - Chapter I: No Rest for the Wicked
Thanks so much ashlingwolf! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :) The prologues definitely do help set up the story, so check them out if you ever have the time! ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: A Song of Exile - Chapter I: No Rest for the Wicked
Thanks so much ashlingwolf! I'm really glad you enjoyed it :) The prologues definitely do help set up the story, so check them out if you ever have the time! ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: A Song of Exile - Prologue: Sun and Stars pt. II
Hello again Jhinx! Thanks so much for reading all the prologues, I know they're a handful :') When I go back to edit I'll be sure to cut it down, ...
Jul 31, 2016 -
Re: A Song of Exile - Chapter I: No Rest for the Wicked
Side note: let's just say that the black cat will appear again very soon *hint hint wink wink*
Jul 28, 2016 -
Re: A Song of Exile - Chapter I: No Rest for the Wicked
Hi Jhinx, thank you so much for your review! I appreciate your honesty, and of course I'm constantly on the lookout for ways to improve my writing. I did take ...
Jul 28, 2016 -
Re: A Song of Exile - Prologue: Sun and Stars pt. I
Wow, thanks so much for your review! It's so helpful to see the perspective of someone who is a fan of the fantasy genre. I hope that I can answer ...
Jul 27, 2016 -
Re: A Song of Exile - Prologue: Sun and Stars pt. I
Aweh thanks so much for the review Cups! I'm glad that I was able to communicate Cyra's struggle with her birth mother, to be honest I was a bit apprehensive ...
Jul 27, 2016 -
Re: Thunder and Ice Prologue ~ A Heart of Ice
Yeah sure, I'd like to be updated! And no problem!
Jul 27, 2016 -
Re: A Song of Exile - Prologue: Dark Alleys pt. II
Hey Cups, thanks for the review! I'm grateful that you'd like to be updated on A Song of Exile! I'm trying to upload a part at least once a day, ...
Jul 26, 2016 -
Re: A Song of Exile - Prologue: Dark Alleys pt. I
Hi AnarchyWolf, thanks so much for your feedback! It was really helpful and I'm definitely going to keep your considerations in mind when I write future chapters! (Also so sorry ...
Jul 25, 2016 -
Re: A Song of Exile - Prologue: Dark Alleys pt. I
Aweh thanks so much! This means a lot to me %uD83D%uDE0A
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