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  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: My Internal Combustion

    Thank's a lot for the review and compliments Sam! :) I'd be delighted if you do look into some more of my work.

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: My Internal Combustion

    Hi Strange! Well, the poem is not about the zone. :) It's about heart break though. Someone broke my heart and for the first time I decided not to cry ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: My Internal Combustion

    Hi there Fortis! First of all, thanks a lot for the review. Just by the length of it I could tell that you took your time to look through the ...

    Jun 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: My heart has a heart and it's broken

    thanks a lot for the review. :) And for the compliments too.

    Apr 27, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Four verses of sadness ( The man with no fare )

    Yet another amazing review from you GoldFlame. Thanks a lot. :) I'll take all your highlights to consideration.

    Apr 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Four verses of sadness ( The man with no fare )

    A great review! Thanks a lot for the compliments and the insightful highlights. :)

    Apr 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Four verses of sadness ( The man with no fare )

    A great review! Thanks a lot for the compliments and the insightful highlights. :)

    Apr 8, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Angeions: Chapter 13

    Hi Kyllorac. Thanks for the insightful review. I checked the errors you highlighted and have rectified them on the draft. I'm aware of the freelance editors, it's just that I ...

    Mar 31, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Four verses of sadness ( The man with no fare )

    Hey Cookie, glad you liked the poem. I appreciate the abounding compliments. About the title, I just couldn't find the one i preferred most between the two.

    Mar 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Four verses of sadness ( The man with no fare )

    haha, thank's for the wonderful review. And what can say, I guess i like commas. :)

    Mar 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: My heart has a heart and it's broken

    Hey Sophie. :) I love those four lines as well, they oozed right out of me. haha Thanks a lot for the acclamation!

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: My heart has a heart and it's broken

    Hi Seastormy! Thanks for the review and the compliments. And yeah, those were omissions, including the comma. :) I swear I proofread it two million times before I posted it. ...

    Mar 19, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Angeions: Chapter 13

    haha, thanks for the review bugslake. im sorry i didnt reply earlier, i saw your review just now. and about not having a dollar to spend then, its alright. i ...

    Mar 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Angeions: Chapter 10

    a wonderful review. :) You gave me a lot to think about and well, there's always room for improvement. Anyway, I consider your praise much more exceeding than the 'brutal ...

    Mar 6, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Angeions: Chapter 13

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    Mar 5, 2014


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