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  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Love of Richard Nixon

    I understand that there's a time traveler who wants to get a picturenof Nixonnfor whatever reason, but that's not really a hidden meaning. The plot shouldn't be something the reader ...

    Mar 20, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Virus 76

    So you don't take the advice. If you forget to take the advice, then you don't do it. Here's a good source for learning how to review, especially if you ...

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Virus 76

    I think that you would get more compliments if you actually took the advice you were given. People don't like to give compliments where they aren't due.

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: These Brilliant and Beautiful Lies: Ch4

    Mar 17, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Virus 76

    I'm sorry that I seem so harsh in my reviews on your work. I want you to get better, and you don't get better when all you are given is ...

    Mar 16, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Porcelain Doll (Short Story)

    I see where you're coming from with the incomplete sentences, that was mainly my personal preference. Purple prose is basically writing that is too ornate. In some places, it isn't ...

    Mar 15, 2017
  • Short Story » General, General Re: a start.

    Spelling, punctuation, and capitalization.

    Mar 2, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: Children of the Pyramid: Chapter 2 Part 2: A City of Faux Gold

    Just pm me whenever you can because I don't want to forget. I'll get to it when I feel better. Sound good?

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: Children of the Pyramid: Chapter 2 Part 2: A City of Faux Gold

    Sure, shoot me a pm whenever. Just know that I'm not in the best of health right now, so my thoughts may be a little scrambled, but I'll be happy ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Realistic Re: On the Munich Massacre: An Essay

    Thanks for the review! Middle Eastern History is super interesting (and it certainly helps that my teacher is amazing). I would definitely recommend watching Munich, it's a very well done ...

    Feb 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: The Raven: A Five Hundred Word Story

    What do you mean by I've done this before? Do you mean that I have reviewed before?

    Feb 23, 2017
  • Article / Essay » Politics, Realistic Re: On the Munich Massacre: An Essay

    It's a great film, but I recommend watching it with the subtitles on if you do end up watching it. There are some hard to understand accents in the film.

    Feb 17, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: And so are We

    The stanzas are all supposed to be 3 lines each, but for whatever reason, I can never get the shift enter thing to work 100% of the time. And I ...

    Feb 15, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Scolopendra chapter 4

    There's one thing I should probably clarify. The men weren't experimenting on the Scolopendra. They were providing them with food. Thanks so much for the review. I'll definitely take these ...

    Feb 11, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Scolopendra chapter 4

    I just realized that there's an entire sequence that isn't italicized. I'll fix that. You may understand the chapter better if you reread it with that bit fixed. I had ...

    Feb 9, 2017


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