indigochild1991

Hello there!! Firstly I should say I am shocked you have only one review!! I found this a lovely piece of work, which albeit may need a little work here ...

Hey!! First impression:wow. The only thing is that as said before, maybe the 'not of green but blue' is a little too much to digest, but really I'm no expert ...

Hey! I love Harry Potter fanfics ad love that you've chosen to write about one of the most interesting characters. I love the idea. I'e never read a young Tom ...

Aw this was lovely, because you spoke so simply about your feelings. Loved it! I am a huge Michael Jackson fan too. I first learned about him because I hugely ...

Hey there! Well, I love your idea. I think it's one of those lovely, classic sort of stories. I'm not into nit-picking on the technical aspects of writing, but I ...

I have to say that I liked it! A lot! Perhaps because personally I sympathise with what you write and feeling trapped/in a dead end is one of my worst ...

Hello! You have such a lovely style the whole way through-I couldn't help smiling while I was reading, but luckily I didn't laugh, as I am sitting at a computer ...

Oooh. This is so dark. There's a very eerie, dark atmosphere throughout. Your structure is pretty innivative, if I may say, which I like. Very different-like you're owning it. Can ...

I think that yoir poem is very pretty, with a real innocence to it, which is lovely to read. It's so simple but so pretty at the same time. I ...

Wow! That's...amazing. I'm not pretending to completely understand what it means, but I loved it. There's something about the words that's just...wow. I think the length adds to it because ...

The poem is absoloutely beatiful with a simplicity that adds to that. I love your personification of the ocean. And the title really drew me in. Honestly, I don't really ...

Wow. This is like nothing I have ever read before. It was so creepy, because of the innocent little girl as the demon. On the idea of second person, I ...

Hello! Honestly, I was absorbed into this story. You maintained quite a spooky, eerie style of writing throughout, with lots of suspense. That I liked. So has this character got ...

Hi there! Firstly, you have a good idea here. I think you can really make it your own. I like your characters. Maybe as you continue to develop your story ...

Hello again! Firstly, I'd like to say that your description is beautiful. It really painted a vivid picture in my mind of the scene. Lovely imagery there. I also like ...