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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Play of Life

    Basically, the poem is about how people act as if its okay. Wearing a "mask" so to speak, to keep their true feelings hidden. As soon as the "mask" is ...

    Nov 14, 2010
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: crying on the cross

    This is one amazing poem. Your a really good poet and this poem says it. Keep writing!!! :D

    Nov 7, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)

    This is really funny!! You're really good at making parodys!

    Aug 16, 2010
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: The French Revolution Song (parody of Hey Soul Sister)

    I seriously, absolutely LOVED this!!!! I laughed the whole way through it!! I kinda wish we had to do stuff like this for school!!

    Aug 16, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: romance fiction

    I really like this story. Some punctuation and capitalization issues, but an all over great story!

    Aug 16, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: What happoned to 'You and Me'?

    I really, really, really like this. It was nicely written and I can relate. Good Job!! Keep Writing!!!

    Aug 15, 2010


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