imaginemymind

I COMPLETELY agree that the last two lines do not belong... Thanks for the review. I apreciate it and I also like it when poems have like a dark feel ...

Well I guess in a way you can say she is .. not literally. This is more about a dying friendship than anything else. The narrator feels that Mary Ann ...

Wow ... wasn't expecting someone to review the piece so quickly.. THANKSSS!! :) ... I really aprreciate your comments Your AWESOME -XOXO imaginemymind

Really good chapter .. I was really suprised when jeremy spoke .. lol even though it was a little . Keep on writing . (Sorry for the very very very ...

Wow . this is good. much better than your first chapter. still can use some tweaking but really good. your improving.. keep it up :] -imaginemymind.!