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I like some of the description you've done! The use of the word Ivory to describe the white of winter is unique, and creative. It's nice! Also, the stanza on ...

I love how despite using such a short form of poetry, you can still give so much meaning. It sounds so passionate, and I can really see your feelings coming ...

I really like this poem! I feel like you've poured a lot of emotion into this. My favourite section would have to be the 3rd, which shows just how much ...

I didn't really understand the meaning of the poem, however I really liked the first two stanzas. The first sentence is definitely my favorite line, as it's very easy to ...

The beginning really drew me in, with the unusual way of telling it in an almost fairytale way. It seemed to be a nice story about a lovely little bear, ...

Nice emotions through the piece! I do like this a lot. Having this in the present tense makes it seem more urgent in a way, and gives it more impact ...