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Thank you (:

Noo. It was the date of which we started our relationship. So, its fresh. And I spotted that is shouldve been in at first. But thank you (: Only her ...

Thank you (:

You always find a way to make me feel good babe

That is true. I couldve used better placement. I wasnt really worried about spelling though.

Alright. Thanks (: I am a very awkward person, so, that may not be repairable, but the line breakup helps a lot.

I was having trouble with this one. But tell me your thoughts...

This is a very realistic and heart-touching poem. Great work. (: It really shows the reader the characters' feelings.

Thank you (:

I'll do another one for you sometime this next week. Much longer.