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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Give pain, then take it again.

    I love the feeling of the poem. You can definitely tell you in quite the mood of rage and/or hatred. Anyways, I loved it. You're a great poet. And a ...

    Jul 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Innocence Bane

    This was a very short, heartful, to the point poem. I find it touching and free. Your rhyme scheme, is not forced at all, but I find that it disturbs ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Blood

    This poem of yours gives me a great idea of the situation/nature of the character. The first half describes a great happening which I love. Then fades to what we ...

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A Gothic Poem

    Great imagary. (: Keep up the great work, fellow poet. (: Review my poem?

    Jul 24, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Trouble, My Favorite (Chapter 3: Remembering) and Chapter 4

    This is awesome babe (: I love it. I know I didn't do much but you're welcome. I love you

    Jul 23, 2011


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