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  • Short Story » Health, Spiritual Re: Ask me who I am and this is what I'll tell you

    thanks so much for your review and I may touch up on those errors!

    Jun 11, 2021
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Disappointment

    Thanks so much and I may touch up a little on that ending!

    Jun 10, 2021
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Disappointment

    Omg you're making me blush, but thank you so much

    Jun 10, 2021
  • Other » Realistic, General Re: Disappointment

    Awww you're so sweet and thanks so much for the kind review!

    Jun 10, 2021
  • Other » Health, Dramatic Re: What really goes on inside my head.

    Awww I really appreaciate this and thanks so much!

    Jun 9, 2021
  • Other » Health, Dramatic Re: What really goes on inside my head.

    Thanks so much for your very kind review and I will definitely tie up my thoughts and and will definitely delve into the themes a little more. Thanks!

    Jun 9, 2021
  • Other » Health, Dramatic Re: What really goes on inside my head.

    Heya sis! Ahh, thanks so much and I love your interpretations on this piece and you always manage to dig into meanings and symbolism that even the author didn't even ...

    Jun 8, 2021
  • Other » Health, Dramatic Re: What really goes on inside my head.

    Thanks so much and your suggestion was very helpful and I completely agree with this, I did think that perhaps the audience would be not properly informed on what I ...

    Jun 8, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mature

    This was so relatable and I know how that feels. I used to be called mature too and I still kinda do, but I don't really care as much anymore. ...

    Jun 2, 2021
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: The farm that is life

    Aww thanks so much!! Glad you enjoyed it!

    May 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Politics, Realistic Re: The farm that is life

    Aww, thanks! And the double meaning was exactly what I was going for!

    May 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: White lies

    Thanks so much and glad that you could relate to it!

    May 19, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Working clockwise

    Thanks!

    May 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A play of irony

    Yes definitely, this was a really helpful review and thanks so much!

    May 19, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Working clockwise

    Thanks for your encouragement and I will keep practising experimental poetry!

    May 19, 2021


Besides, if you want perfection, write a haiku. Anything longer is bound to have some passages that don't work as well as they might.
— Philip Pullman