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  • Poetry » General, Other Re: my jeopardy of late-night thoughts

    I really love this piece of work. I love the fact that the style of it implies that all of those questions have answers that can only be based upon ...

    Feb 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Prologue: Train Hopper

    I think that this could really develop into a really nice story. I liked the line: 'I knew there was more beyond the borders of endless tall pale green grass, ...

    Feb 7, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Silence

    This was a really beautiful poem which I think illustrates the loneliness of hardship. It's like distinguishing between fact or fiction, and sometimes you can lose yourself on the way. ...

    Feb 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Culture, Romantic Re: Since Its Been A While(Flies In The Dark Poem)

    I haven't done any reviews before, but I think that this was a really beautiful poem and I liked the message that love prevails over money and materialism. I loved ...

    Feb 6, 2021


I would be a terrible novel protagonist.
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