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  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: It Always Rains

    So much love and sadness. I liked it. It was long but it was worth it. reminds me of a poem i wrote before. a long time go. though i ...

    Mar 23, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Song of Mankind

    Sniffle, I loved this. I have a rel issue with rhyming things and you put this into the perfect format. Makes one think about a lot of stuff that you ...

    Mar 23, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Teen Fiction Re: Those Who Were Forgotten

    REVIEW TIME. "theory" i liked it but there was little fear based stuff. if things are going wrong make it go wrong. the diary in the future should be her ...

    Mar 22, 2013
  • Other » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Beast, Meet Snoink.

    awwww. its so romantic. and monster movie sweet. "Really confused and sad people don't normally turn cannibalistic." i liked this line to best. if this is really going to be ...

    Mar 22, 2013
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: We Rise in Darkness

    The short was good, and the brutalness of the angel seems more realistic then most of the other stuff i have read. There are some people that would make the ...

    Mar 21, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Action / Adventure Re: Starting Over: For Dummies, Pt 2

    LOL. i love him already. A tall boy that hates frogs. nice. I liked it and the writing style is just perfect for the way that the first person acts ...

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Monsters.

    when i read this I got the image of shadows and a smile that gleems sharped fangs and saliva dripping from the lips. you dont know which monster it is ...

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Rendez-vous with the crows

    I find that the hardest thing for me is to write music and poems while making them dark. good job on this one. I liked the lyric "lose all control ...

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Short Story » General, General Re: No One Here

    Why does this remind me of every time i go out with friends. god I love this Short. " In the end, nothing happens because my brain is confused. Anyway, ...

    Mar 20, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Passion And Thorns

    This is less of a poem and more of a prose. a script of longing but with not true angle. focus on the roses and the meaning behind the color ...

    Mar 20, 2013


You can't blame the writer for what the characters say.
— Truman Capote