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Re: It Always Rains
So much love and sadness. I liked it. It was long but it was worth it. reminds me of a poem i wrote before. a long time go. though i ...
Mar 23, 2013 -
Re: The Song of Mankind
Sniffle, I loved this. I have a rel issue with rhyming things and you put this into the perfect format. Makes one think about a lot of stuff that you ...
Mar 23, 2013 -
Re: Those Who Were Forgotten
REVIEW TIME. "theory" i liked it but there was little fear based stuff. if things are going wrong make it go wrong. the diary in the future should be her ...
Mar 22, 2013 -
Re: Beast, Meet Snoink.
awwww. its so romantic. and monster movie sweet. "Really confused and sad people don't normally turn cannibalistic." i liked this line to best. if this is really going to be ...
Mar 22, 2013 -
Re: We Rise in Darkness
The short was good, and the brutalness of the angel seems more realistic then most of the other stuff i have read. There are some people that would make the ...
Mar 21, 2013 -
Re: Starting Over: For Dummies, Pt 2
LOL. i love him already. A tall boy that hates frogs. nice. I liked it and the writing style is just perfect for the way that the first person acts ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Monsters.
when i read this I got the image of shadows and a smile that gleems sharped fangs and saliva dripping from the lips. you dont know which monster it is ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Rendez-vous with the crows
I find that the hardest thing for me is to write music and poems while making them dark. good job on this one. I liked the lyric "lose all control ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: No One Here
Why does this remind me of every time i go out with friends. god I love this Short. " In the end, nothing happens because my brain is confused. Anyway, ...
Mar 20, 2013 -
Re: Passion And Thorns
This is less of a poem and more of a prose. a script of longing but with not true angle. focus on the roses and the meaning behind the color ...
Mar 20, 2013
