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Hello I'm back, I love the direction that the book is headed. I had mixed feelings about serendipity being alive because I despise Viscera. She should die 100 times but ...

Hi Grace I really like the introduction. It seems very graphic and violent ( I like violence). My concern with is story is how you described Jess. She is 16 ...

Hi! I read the story. and at first I was kind of blown away that they would just be fed up and run away for two months! I find that ...

Hello I'm not going to say anything about grammar because my grammar is not very good either. I'd like to say that your story so far is good. It sets ...

That was intense. I enjoyed reading this story. It had a nice backstory to it. It was long enough to explain what's going on but short enough to keep me ...