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Before anything else, and if you 'hear' nothing else I have to say, this is a brilliant idea! I can see many paths where this could go. But now for ...

First off, I want to say that I can tell you have great ideas. This introduction to the story and your writing has a ton of potential. However, there are ...

Seeing as how I agree with mostly (if not everything) which was stated above, this is not really a review. I hate fighting in general, especially when it happens for ...

First of all, I would like to say that this is a very well-written piece, although I have not read the original. I must say, however, that there were a ...

I really like the plot of your book, and there is not much to complain about, if anything at all. The idea is brilliant, and I cannot wait to read ...

I really enjoyed the excerpt above. The right words were used in the right spots, and it is a very interesting concept. One thing that distracted me was the formatting, ...

This seems like an awesome idea, and I would say run with it. However, every so often people need some water to keep them moving, and your "water" would be ...