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haha, Lydia, it's not "four words", for a thought you had me thinking I had a blonde moment. The title is "four letters", I beleive. :)

Thank you! And yes, I know it's in the wrong classification. I wanted to see how many people said that! :elephant:

Thanks everyone for the criticism! To tell the truth, this is a second body of a piece I had made earlier in the year. I was *kind of* trying to ...

Thx youhs. Yeah, i showed this to a couple of adults and they said the same things about the stanzas and stuff, :P

a m a z i n g. that's just it. You're fourteen and you write like you've been doing it for y e a r s. It's beautiful!! Thank you ...

thanks! yeah, the funny thing is in real life, i named my truck clyde... lol

The voice pierced my ears again. "Hey, kid," the voice said. Hmm... male.. I thought. I opened my eyes, and turned towards the sound. He was a boy, around fifteen, ...

thanks guys! I'll have something up soon.

ummhhh... I only talk about winter once in this poem, please clarify so I can work on it? I love that you're correcting me, I need it, but please tell ...

I love it!! I only had problems picturing Skylar, what color are his eyes, his hair, what's cute about how he moves? ...Girls notice that. Continue on, though, I really ...