icanbefixed

thank you! ;) I was supposed to be doing my spanish homework instead of writing poems, thus, I wrote my poem in spanish.. don't you love being side-tracked?

I agree. I've been told I'm very vague in what I write, which to me is a good thing. A lot of times I write it to get the point ...

Why, thank you everyone! I've tried to switch it up a little to fix everyone's desires... is it any better?

thanks, ben! Yeah. it's one of those poems where I just sat down (with a friend in the room) and started writing. she sat there staring at me for half ...

There are a few word mistakes I caught, but those can be fixed. haha, since my name is icanbefixed, ... :D I thought that was funny.

I think I'll leave Kamas to do the review... But thanks for sharing! You're rhyming scheme made it very hearfelt. Love, Fixed :smt027

Vast!! So... predatory? Nah.. threatening. Kilo, I loves your writing. I already reviewed this on your other profile. Lol. Love, Fixed :smt027

Interesting. Near the end of the poem, you wrote, "Maybe someday he'll open my eyes." Did you mean to say "his eyes" or is this talking about a revalation? haha, ...

haha you won't believe this but I actually was inspired to write this after reading 'The Highwayman'! the moonlight, in the moonlight, in the moonlight...

:elephant: Okay, I've changed them, just for you. Here's the excerpts from the part you wanted changed: I cut myself off. Something told me, in the back of my mind, ...

Thank yahs!

It's supposed to be like that, frantic, jumping from one idea to the next, like a fire. Fires aren't very focused in on one spot, they kiss the air in ...

Grin!! It's adorable!! I absolutely love this, because it's so right! Rob is G R O S S. I don't have any criticism. At all. Love, Fixed.

Beast. That's the word I'm going to use to describe this. I laugh. :smt040

:smt023 Love it! Professional, almost.