icanbefixed

Oh, dear! I might just have to review this, shan't I? *I don't make any sense talking like that* Hey! It's Fixed, here! :) I must say, you've done a ...

Hey, I'm Fixed. I'll review this tonight. First of all, I would like to say that your description kind of had a crescendo there, towards the end. I sat for ...

I'm going to be brutally honest... it's cliche. I started reading this and automatically went into auto-pilot, just kind of rolling with it. But then I couldn't even do that. ...

Oh dear goodness! I love this! It's repetitive, but not redundant, if that makes sense. The emotion is perfect. That's all I have to say. It's good. Love, Fixed :smt027

Oh. My. God. I was COMPLETELY captivated the whole time. I loved every minute of it. It was perfectly spread, making my emotions sway not unlike reeds in your descriptive ...

Hello. I don't believe I caught the best part of your poem. It would please me if you went through and checked that it was readable. I absolutely loved how ...

Wow... I'm left speechless. This is really good. I'm glad that you put it on here, deafwriter. I want more. I've found that I was practically blinded to what you ...

this is work of a higher being. *likes* I don't have anything to say about it! Thanks for showing :) Love, Fixed :smt027

Oh, wow! You just decided to conjure this out of nowhere? (BY the way, I'm Fixed, I'll be reviewing you.) Okay. First thing's first, you're telling a story, so this ...

It certainly is a poem, but it's more like a Shel Silverstein poem or something. (Not that I've read much of her.) Bahaha, I'm pretty sure Shel Silverstein is male... ...

Hey, call me Fixed. I'll be your reviewer today. :smt024 People think they're sincere Fake is all I see and hear The rhythm is weird in that second line... I ...

Wow. This is... amazing. *feels like Paula Abdul* You're writing is great, I love how you really let me see the thoughts in your head. I'm very vague in my ...

I don't want to bash anything on this! *glances* Just read through it out loud and make sure all of the commas are correctly placed. If you're pausing mid-sentence, it ...

I'm jealous! You caught this moment beautifully! But... didn't the other man... get squished? Okay. I my crying became weeping as the man followed it's path, blocking it again. Aha! ...

This poem should be a song! :) all you need is a nice guitar and a drum beat. Instant epicness. Hey, I'm Fixed. I'll be reviewing you today. First, I ...