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That was very creative :D i really liked it a lot. Keep writing :D

Wow, thats really sad D: but the story, it was great. I had a clear picture of what was going on in my mind, and i was sucked in once ...

Hi ben :) I really like this, and for not writing poetry a lot, this is very good :) To me, it seemed like this line didnt really fit in ...

Woww, once i read the first few sentances i was automatically hooked. I absolutely love the way you wrote this, and the way you described everything was very well done. ...

Hii, this was very nicely and well written and I really liked it, it is very creative and i really like how you kept saying "thats to depressing" or "thats ...

I really liked this, The way it is written is very nicely done Good job :D My favorite line is, "he celebrates his birthday coughing up tumbleweed" it seems to ...