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Hi InfiniteRectangles! Thanks for sharing your poem and happy review day! First of all, the good things! I really thought you captured the frantic, confused tone of the narrator. I ...

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Hi InfiniteRectangles! Thanks for sharing your poem and happy review day! First of all, the good things! I really thought you captured the frantic, confused tone of the narrator. I ...

I second the comment on the flow by SaveDodosNopeTooLate. Seemed a bit off for me as well.

Thanks so much for your review and your insight; I'm loving seeing what this poem means to different people. Have a great day!

Thanks for all of your extra insight into the poem! It's been so interesting seeing how other people read it and what it represents to them. Have a great day/night ...

Hey there, thanks for the review! I'd actually never thought about the meaning of the poem in the way that you did. Instead of children, I thought about young women. ...

lol you're fine. Thanks!

Thanks so much for your review it's much appreciated :). Since it was a free-verse poem I didn't have to rhyme it, so I didn't. Thanks for your compliments and ...

Thank you so much for taking the time to write such a thorough review! I appreciate it so much!!!

Thanks for taking the time to review! Yeah, I did mean to write "In". Thanks again!

This story is absolutely hilarious I am dying right now!!! I have no words because I can't stop laughing. This is the best Christmas story ever.

Thanks for your review! I agree that this memoir needs more of how I was feeling, some of my friends told me that too. Thanks for taking the time to ...

Yeah, this memoir is all true!