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Re: Stick Fight
Hi, friend. :-D I really liked your piece, and with just a couple of notes, it could be even more fantastic. 1.) Feel free to describe Jim and Brett a ...
Aug 23, 2012 -
Re: Catharsis
Hey dearest, Sorry this took so long. Life got in the way, as it is prone to do. Anyway, great piece, with a little polish, it'll look even better. 1.) ...
Aug 23, 2012 -
Re: Baby
Hi honey, I really enjoyed this piece quite a bit more than usual. The style of writing seems very vintage, 1905s-esque to me, considering it tells just of people, and ...
Aug 11, 2012 -
Re: The Field
Hello dear, Normally, I totally shy away from any sort of romantic piece, but yours sounded interesting. So here we are. :-D If you were working on description, you got ...
Aug 10, 2012 -
Re: The Emotional Education of a Vampire
Hello, darling. Before I start; have you ever read the book (or seen the movie, I guess) "Interview with the Vampire?" I think you might like it, and this piece ...
Aug 9, 2012 -
Re: The Executioner
Hi honey, Great piece, you definitely have some serious talent. There's just a couple of things that would take this piece from great to fantastic. *takes out red editor's pen* ...
Aug 9, 2012
