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I really like this :) There's not really anything for me to suggest. It was very clear, and it was easy to know what you were talking about. Plus, I ...

Wow! I didn't see that coming! This is really good, but it sometimes has a couple sentences that don't flow very well. I can't give you an example because my ...

I really liked this, but there isn't enough to leave a tear-it-apart review. Well I’m not like any of these silly girls who just sit around twiddling their thumbs waiting ...

I'm not going to review this, because theres too much. You're trying so hard to get to the good part, that you're rushing through the beginning and nothing makes since. ...

You are an amazing writer, but this story needs a hook. I read the whole thing, but I was losing interest. Try adding more description, and more emotion. This should ...

This is really good! You caught my attention immediately. A few nit picks... He’s wearing a blue plaid shirt and a pair of dark jeans that are torn and ripped ...

I remember the blood spilling ever so clearly, smashed in the face with a 2 by 4, my body rolling down the hill landing in that very field. The 2 ...

Haha this is cute, I really like it :) It's so true! Especialy the french fry part :D -Rach

Hi, I'm new :) I thought this was descrbibed beautifully, but it was a little long. I was drawn in by your title, and the chapter captivated me :) -Rach