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Re: God. (renamed from Strength and why I dont have much of it)
Snoink- Thanks for the constructive criticizm. These comments are like *AAAH (terrible)*more terriblenesses*and then (chorus of angels) applause*more applause*and finally... dum dum dummmmmm! WHAT CAN
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Re: Fall Out With Yourself
I don't get it. *blissfully unaware* O.o seriously. What goes on here?
Aug 30, 2007 -
Re: The Other Way
Have you ever read that story...argh, I forget what it's called, but it's kinda like this. It starts with a narrative about a unicorn who has to go save a ...
Aug 30, 2007 -
Re: How to Kill a Baby
Wait- why is she trying to sell her baby? Who is she selling it to? This is so CREEPY!! :( Poor, poor baby.
Aug 30, 2007 -
Re: Dreams of Suicide
lmao! XD you're brilliant. Absolutely brilliant.
Aug 30, 2007 -
Re: The Sminks
Okay. I'm convinced youre on crack. Keep doing it XD
Aug 30, 2007 -
Re: The Cra-yon Lay-onds: A Highly Experimental Piece of Writing
^_^ if crack makes him this good of a writer, I'm tempted to say "Buy more". rotfl
Aug 30, 2007 -
Re: I am the Tornado
Omg, I love shape poems! XD Like Cadmium said, center it por favor! I like the way you spelled out Death at the end, but my favorite part was stanza ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: God. (renamed from Strength and why I dont have much of it)
Graesch- I had my doubts about that sentence too. I was gonna try to rework it, but... I'll just have to try a little harder on it. I'm glad you ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: Trevor [Deceased]
Hehe. Poor fishy... very nice story though. I liked it :)
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: God. (renamed from Strength and why I dont have much of it)
No I don't. My school pretty much avoids conflicts of all kinds because they're too lazy to debate about things like religion. Knowing me, Id pull this out and everyone ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: God. (renamed from Strength and why I dont have much of it)
You guys all helped so much :) RE teacher? whats that?
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: God. (renamed from Strength and why I dont have much of it)
it's edited. Tell me what you think now...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: Guilt
I liked it, despite what others had to say *glares at Cornelius person*. I read something someone said about blood on your hands... I liked it. It's good anyways. Good ...
Aug 29, 2007 -
Re: God. (renamed from Strength and why I dont have much of it)
Ok, just to clarify, she (me) doesn't have a bad wrist. She (I) had some... err... problems... anyways, thanks for the advice.
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