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  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: So Heavy

    Thank you so much!

    Sep 4
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: So Heavy

    I do get your point, and think about this before writing my next poem. I appreciate your response. Thank you!

    Sep 4
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Celeste

    You are right, I did write it as a conversation across time. Thank you for your review

    Sep 2
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Maggots in her Brain

    I wrote as she did su**ide, but people can think it the way they want. Thank you so much

    Sep 2
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Maggots in her Brain

    In the poem, "they" are basically all the people who saw her in that position, in blood. And they're saying "this too was destined," like, you know how people say ...

    Sep 2
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Maggots in her Brain

    If you mean by "But to a place unknown" I meant that she's now basically somewhere no one knows, which signifies that she's in the afterlife. Now that I read ...

    Sep 2
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Maggots in her Brain

    Thank you so much

    Sep 2
  • Poetry » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Lost Reverence

    Hey! This poem is genuinely so amazing and beautifully written. It feels really personal, like you know your purpose but you're just not working on it. It made me think ...

    Sep 2
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Celeste

    Thank youu

    Sep 2


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