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  • Other » Narrative, Other Re: Why do we keep making children?

    Thank you for pointing those things out! This just reminds me that I need to get to editing, haha. :P

    Dec 6, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The Cruelty of Women

    Thanks! I'm really happy you thought that way; that's exactly what I was trying to deliver. c:

    Dec 4, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Other Re: Why do we keep making children?

    I wouldn't necessarily call myself an antinatalist, but good god certain people shouldn't have kids.

    Dec 4, 2015
  • Other » Narrative, Other Re: Why do we keep making children?

    iz ok

    Dec 4, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Scenes from Downtown, 2015.

    Thank you! And yes, this was just something I wrote while driving through downtown and taking in what I saw there. And it's short for the simple fact that I'm ...

    Nov 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Perch: Chapter 1

    Yes, I would love for you to tag me! Can't wait to see what else is in store for Rafe. c:

    Nov 9, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: I Am so Proud of You

    Yup, little Eli did. :P Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: I Am so Proud of You

    Thank you! This story was actually written for an assignment which had a word limit, so I wasn't able to do as much as I would've liked. But I understand ...

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: I Am so Proud of You

    Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. c:

    Nov 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Narrative Re: The Sonnet of Lochlan Doyle - [2]

    Haha, don't worry, this isn't useless at all! And I actually have the next chapter done; it's just in its editing phase. Thank you very much for this review. I ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Narrative Re: The Sonnet of Lochlan Doyle - [1]

    Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I'm also pleased that I was able to make Lock likeable despite his personality. ^-^ Thanks for this review. :D

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The Cruelty of Women

    Haha, thank you very much! I'm glad you caught what was going on between the lines; that's one thing I'm always afraid I haven't communicated properly. I'm glad you enjoyed ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The Cruelty of Women

    Him noticing the jacket and other things were actually put there on purpose. I wanted to emphasize on the fact that he's trying to find every slight fault in her ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: The Cruelty of Women

    That was beautifully said, and I agree wholeheartedly. :D Thank you very much for this review! I appreciate it. c:

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Altera Vita - Chapter 2 - Negotiations

    FORGET WHAT I SAID IN THE FIRST PART. ...I found the first chapter. Wow, these glasses are pretty useless.

    Oct 25, 2015


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