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OK, can this story get any better? I do not need to repeat the grammer errors. Your already aware of them. I liked the fact that you brought the foster ...

My family is from Ukraine and reading this poem hit me straight in the heart. Excellent writing. The ending about her small body ending up with the others was very ...

This poem really touched me, I am not an expert on writing poems, but I do know what I like. This flowed well and was easy to read. It touched ...

I was drawn into this poem from the beginning. I thought it was about a real drug all the way through it, until the end. Took me off gaurd yet ...

I can not get enough of this story, WOW! Your descriptions are very good, I could actually see it as I was reading it. The only thing I could see ...

This story is very interesting, you were able to keep my attention. I liked the way you went forward from the prologue. It will be intresting to read how you ...

I am not good with poems, but this is good, i really liked it. Sad though that you would have a friend that would cause you to come to this. ...

I enjoyed the new characters you introduced. It adds to the intrigue. The last paragraph confused me a little, if the warriors can not fight without prayer then why can ...

I am sad this is the last chapter for me to read right now, please let me know when you post your next chapter. I loved the scene in this ...

You are adding more characters and making this even more exciting. I liked seeing Aaron trying to figure out the relationship between Christian and Seth. You are really making his ...

Kim I like the way you described Aaron and the war angels at the beginning of the chapter. It makes me wonder, what is going to happen and holds my ...

OK! WOW, WOW and more WOW. The fight between Hate and Seth was absolutely amazing. The way you described it made me feel like I was there and rooting Seth ...

This chapter really held my attention. I am not sure where you are going with this, but I am anxious to keep reading. I am drawn to Aaaron's character, you ...

A friend told me to check this story out. WOW what an interesting story, I look forward to reading the rest of the chapters, I can see it has alaready ...

This story I can see will continue to draw readers, you have a talent and I enjoyed reading it. I do need to say that you had 3 different names ...