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Hello NaRachel :D I liked this poem especially at the beginning, at some places it rhymed and the others not so much, i think this poem would actually be awesome ...

Oh DEAR!!! you nearly... i stress nearly made me cry. Wow where did you learn to write like that?? I thought it was about you first, then obviously it wasn't. ...

Aww i loved it... the whole time you had me on the verge of nearly accepting a bad fate.... and then boom, its awesome. :D Because usually you can tell ...

Hey :D I really loved this its very, ummm lets say emotional in a raw way. You have such emotions in there... you didn't actually dwell on the emotions much ...

Hi :D Your poem is very nice, i love the way you use the same words to start in one para then skip and then start over with the repetition ...

Heya! :D I loved your poem alot, i say this to everyone i know... but really, are you sure you wrote it yourself? Its amazing, except.... the last line left ...

I love it you have described the very essence of why i love reading, and writing..... and any type of art!!! Fab!!! And i especially love the way you ended ...

Heya!!! :D I really love this poem, i felt what you were talking about, the serenity and feeling of belonging to the place you came from. Except that one part ...

Sigh, i love winter and your poem just makes it sound so dreary and terrible!!! :? oh bother you!! But apart from that fact i liked the poem, the way ...

wow not your best!!! thats outrageous... ud probably do better :O wow how im waiting for that, but its really nice, i could imagine it without the image of your ...

Beautiful.... and now im envious i wish i knew Italian language, somehow i have a feeling that it makes much more sense and has a much deeper meaning saying it ...

Hahahaha your an awesome writer, i really really love this its funny. When i was in the middle i was thinking, oh how sad another i love her but she ...

you have a very nice way of writing and i couldn't see anything wrong with it except for the fact that its quiet small. You should add more to it, ...

Really i love this story its so interesting, you have a box in your brain and its spilling with ideas :D go finish it girl i Love IT!!! yes and ...

OMG I loved this to little shreds You are a positively fantastic writer!!!! for one moment I thought this was really and truly about you and your life, but its ...