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Hello, Welcome to YWS hope you like it here, Your piece is really good you are doing a good job I think the other person before me covered everything but ...

Hello, I will give you a short review for your story today, I think it is really well done and think you are doing a very good job writing it ...

Hey, You are doing a great job, Toy did have a few sentenses messed up and yeah you do say "she" alot, But you are doing a good job anyway ...

Hey Hero, I think your story is doing really good with your story, I think everyone else got all the mistakes. so I just wanted to let you know your ...

Hey, this is realy good i like it but like Erin said make the starting a little longer I want it to last longer and want to read more that ...

Hey, Doing a good job I just started reading it was good I didn't get to read it all because I am busy but I hope you write more soon ...

Hey, This is really good! I am really curious as to what happened to her sister. you are a really good writer but what I would really like to see ...

Hey This is beautiful the first paragraph was a little long but very pretty thank you for writing it I loved reading it and hope to see alot more of ...

Hey I really like your stories they are really great I don't ever get bored of reading them and that makes me happy! Your a great writer and I hope ...

hey This is really cool a little short but really cool I can't wait to see more! I hope you have a great day and by the way I think ...

Hey Redsmiles, I love your writing it is awesome! I love it and I hope to see alot more of your writing it is so pretty and easy to read! ...

Hey This is really good i like it alot and yeah i agree alot of people write better stories when they are bored including me sometimes i even write things ...

Wow this is awessome i love it thank you so much for writing this i could read it all day long you are a awesome writer i really hope to ...

this is awesome you have a very abstract mind so do I, love the way you write I am looking forward to reading much more of your writing it's a ...

Hey this is really good i love reading it i was a little confused at the starting but it explained its self thanks so much for writing i really hope ...