hopeispeace

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No, *you're* amazing.

Well thank you muchly.

Warning; the following is complete fluff and shall make the author smile (unless she hates fluff). Bravo! I love this! Truly! *Stands up and claps*. You deserve a hug from ...

I like this. Its very vivid and flows like lyric poetry should. Bravo.

Im jealous of Sarah. By the way, bravo :)

Well, I feel like a buzkill . . . I hated Inkheart . . .

Bravo!

Three words: Show Don't Tell.

I really enjoyed reading this . . . Especially the ending. the way you wrote it made it captivating from start to finish. Bravo!

By the way, if I'm listing things and trying to be dramatic, I use seperate sentancess instead of commas, to. Sincerely, Your friend. Fello writer. Reviwer of your work. Hopeispeace.

I love syfy and this is really good! A bit "done before" maybe but thats okay. Bravo!

I hate cliffhangers with a passion.

Darn I wanted this to be a funny poem about a helpless banana.

I must admit a few lines into this poem I switched my "reading voice" to a Johny Depp accent. That may have been the only reason it sounded so amazing.