hopefull1writter

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Hello Marmalade, I really loved all the descriptions you used and how you can tell that the person in this is just head over heels for the other. This made ...

Hello Snazzy! Your poem was short, beautiful, powerful and I absolutely loved it. The message that you included in this is very strong. I really enjoyed reading this.

Hello Marmalade, I really loved all the descriptions you used and how you can tell that the person in this is just head over heels for the other. This made ...

Thank you so much for your review I absolutely loved reading it. I'm terrible at grammar so thanks for barring with me on that. I'm taking everything you said into ...

Ok. I totally see what you mean and I've always been so bad at grammar so I thank you for staying with it and telling me what you think it's ...

Thank you so much! this was very helpful and I need to have harsh and picky reviews. I've made some changes from what you have seen and its even better ...

I really liked the beginning but you should have kept going with that instead of saying you didn't know what to write so this is all you came up with.

I absolutely love reading this! I love how you describe every detail and how you made the main character in his own world. Very well done! I would love to ...