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Yeah I did try really hard not to have it rhyme but thous where the only words that worked for me... Thanks for the feed back!

I though I might as well tell you all the story behind this particular haiku. I was riding home on the bus and I saw this guy who had a ...

Wow I loved it very humorous I needed that laugh thank you! You're welcome :mrgreen:

That's a great haiku So I'll write this short review I liked it a lot! A haiku comment for a haiku! That's awesome! and thanks :)

Usually, I hate Haikus. However, yours is full of pulchritude. I do really love the visual imagery in this one. It's so gentle, but for something in such a small ...

Thanks for the comments! Thanks I completely missed the 'though' 'through' thing for some reason :smt095 and yeah I think I'll change it to 'window' Thanks again!

I completely agree with you guys. Really the only reason I had it rhyme in the first place was because I was writing it on specific request for a friend ...

Yeah I was thinking the same thing about the flirting thing...I really suck at flirting so I normally try to avoided it but I guess I should just ask my ...

I just want to apologize to everyone for getting defensive up there. It's just that this was the first story I ever posted on the net so I guess I ...

Hiya! Pro-log Just a quick point, easy mistake to make though :) 'Prologue' I loved this prologue, I like the way you use the dictionary quote. Its really creative. You ...

Thanks everyone for your feed back! Um this is really embarrassing but i accidentally posted the unedited version rather then the edited (hince the extent of typos.) I think I ...

Just to clear things up. No the hole thing is not going to be in dialog, only the pro-log/first chapter. I'm sorry if it's confusing, it's just supposed to be ...

I love this! And that's true about most story book princess. I really like how you diatribe the hole thing:) I can't want to read more! (OK ya sorry it's ...