hippie_vampire

I don't like this one of mine vary much but what do you guys think?************************************Stay with me though the cold.Don't leave me when I'm old.Stay with my though sun.You'll always ...

Okay so I have read this in front of three audiences and have it on two other sites. I know it's not my best work--maybe not even that good--but I ...

Moon light through window,I bask in its cool crisp light,It calls down to me.

Okay so this is the prophecy from my last year's NaNoWriMo novel. I really don't like it. The flow is bad, the rhyming is forced, and the ending is weird. ...

Moon beams on mistyroads. Blossoms glow beneath thelight. The silence sings.

Look, up in the sky!The aliens are coming.They will rule the world.

Coffee and cream. Drink,from a ceramic mug. Letthe goodness flow. Mmm.

Hear now, chickadee.Sit upon the old oak I sit beneath.

Turn the antenna,Radio fills with music,Listen to the song.