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Re: Death
Thank you for reading and for the review ❤️ I wrote this on one of the hardest nights I’ve had. I wasn’t focused on perfect words — I just needed ...
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Re: sloth
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Re: True Love
This is not a normal poem, it’s so powerful so true, it really showed what is the true love is, like you create a beautiful definition about it, keep going ...
13h ago -
Re: We live two lives!!
Thank you so much for the warm welcome and for reading! 🤍 I'm really glad the line about the mind feeling "even more real" resonated with you — that's exactly ...
13h ago -
Re: We live two lives!!
Thank you so much for this thoughtful review! 💙 I love how you understood the message of living in both worlds. You're right about the punctuation — I'll fix those. ...
13h ago -
Re: I'm fine
Hey !! I really liked your poem, this made me think of us. of all the times we say "I'm fine" when we really aren't. i just wanted you to ...
21h ago -
Re: Silence
Thank you so much!! 🥺❤️ I'm so happy you connected with the silence and body language part! It means a lot that you felt the flow and philosophy in it. ...
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Re: your brown eyes beside me in bed
This is so beautifully painful. The way you go from "brown-eyed boy" to "stranger somehow" wrecked me. I especially love "you were busy roaming the seas, while i waited for ...
Aug 5 -
Re: Silence
Thank you so much for the detailed feedback 4revrgreen!! You’re right about the ponctuation, I’ll fix it. And I love the idea of adding an example. I’ll work on a ...
Aug 5 -
Re: Silence
Thank you so much Alice !! Yeah, I agree balance is important. I’m glad my words made you think about the true meaning of life ❤️🩹
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