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it was confusing at some parts because I had to figure out who was thinking. But other than that, I really like this. It was almost funny, in a way. ...

I like the similes, metaphors, and imagery. Overall, you are very talented, and you need to keep writing. I could honestly feel the emotion between both the characters (:

these have been making me laugh... so hard.

This was amazing. I love it. It deserves all the credit in the world. You are extremely creative.

"Then Satan burned her in her sleep and sewed her lips together; and with the fires of hell he sealed her in the glass forever." favorite line, defiantly. This poem ...

Sometimes everyone wants a piece But there’s not enough to go round I really liked this line. There are multiple meanings behind it, if you really think about it. the ...

this made me laugh. I don't know why. I actually liked the first one better, I think I spent about five minutes trying to figure out what that poem would ...

I really really really like these rhymes... and the whole idea to the song. no advice. I just wanted to tell you that it's really great ;D keep writing.