hermione2001

Hi alliyah! Thanks for reviewing and for your suggestions. I may put instead of departure time the number of people on the planes. The poem type is called a catalogue ...

I really like this!!!! Thank for posting!! I love the shape and sound of the poem. The way it is read makes it sound like waves crashing on the beach. ...

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Wow. Just wow. This is so good!!! So, I'm assuming the starlight represents something that you loved and had to give up but in the end was beneficial for you. ...

Thank you so much! I am really passionate about this so it's awesome that someone enjoyed it. If you want, I can give you some tips on how I write ...

Thanks! :)

This was really powerful and moving. I really connected with the poem especially the part about fear. I also loved the rhyme scheme because it fit in perfectly with the ...

I really loved this! It was interesting to me how at first it sounds as if you are describing what if feels like to be dehydrated but in just a ...