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chained: i am still searching for what lingers of you

  • Poetry » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: The air is yellow

    HEY HEY!!! review time ONE: THINGS I LIKED I REMEMBER THIS!!! IT SMELLED REALLY BAD!!! ither than that. I like the part "What was the real/color of the trees/smell of ...

    Sep 30, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The Unnamed Poem

    WOAH... INSANE??? FIRSTLY: THINGS I LIKED OKAY, LETS GET DOWN TO BUISNESS. The opening of "tears flow, torrents cascading from my soul" made me envision someone floating through water like ...

    Sep 30, 2023
  • Poetry » Satire, General Re: Cruel Fate

    review tiem!! :D FIRSTLY: THINGS I LIKED The way this touches on how the world is so caught up in clickbait and fake news is really touching, and thats something ...

    Sep 30, 2023
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Biking Past the River, on Hills

    review time ^-^ ONE: THINGS I LIKED Beginning each stanza with I am creates a very distinct rhythm and feel to the poem, and helps make it come together nicely. ...

    Sep 30, 2023
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Realistic Re: Wire Fraud Tutorial (Fake based on a movie)

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    Very informitave, helped me commit wire fraud to pay for my loans that i owe my loan sharks I would rate this 10/10. I love making money, and money loves ...

    Sep 29, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: The Feelings of Silence

    I love this work !! (REVIEW TIME!!!!) (●'◡'●) FIRSTLY, This work is very grim, and pulled out a feeling i never have felt?? It's really impactful. I Love this. Secondly, ...

    Sep 29, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Oh, Moon

    review time o((>ω< ))o FIRSTLY: OH MY GOD. THIS IS AMAZING. I CANNOT EXPRESS MORE FEELINGS. Secondly: I love the usage of the names of the moon in different languages, ...

    Sep 29, 2023
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: lies i take as truths

    Back again, reviewing because I didn't lengthen my original comment enough for it to count as a review. As I said, I really liked the flow of this work. The ...

    Sep 29, 2023


"Storybooks and roleplays are just for fun!" To which I say: of course! But why only "just"? Sometimes fun is found in the full-send. Sometimes fun is found in taking it seriously, and aiming to do it with excellence!
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