heavymetal247

Thank you for the feedback it really helps! :D This was an assignment fr creative writing, the format wanted more dialogue and less detail, I'm more of a poetic/short story ...

Thank you for the feedback it really helped and I had no Idea that I used It's instead of its that was honestly a stupid mistake of mine I should ...

Thank you so much! :D

Thank you lots! XD Your feedback was very helpful I will makes sure to remember that... if I decide to write another Stay awesome and ROCK ON!!! X)

XD Thanks that means a lot! The feedback was very helpful, I haven't been posting a lot of work, but I'll be sure to do so, I've been working on ...

Thank you. Rock on! :D

Thanks for the advice I will be a little more cautious on my flow, and thank you for the detailed review... it's so cool that people are intrigued by my ...

Thank you so much... I'll make sure to find other metaphor's I just needed to get this feeling of a mask off my chest. Thank you once again and stay ...

Thank you, I never saw it that way. Art :D rock on and stay awesome thanks again!

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) stay awesome

Thank you so much for the feed back... it truly helped, and also made me feel confident in my style of writing. I will continue to write, and I can't ...

Thank you and I'm glad you liked it! :D I will definitely check out you writing... and I see what you mean it is confusing, that's why I'm continuing the ...

Thanks! The nitpicks definitely helped :D Rock on!

Thanks! I'm going to continue the story, I just submitted it so I could see what people thought of it. :) Anyways thank you for the review it really helped ...

You too :D