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Re: pain
*second to last line, not last line, sorry...
Mar 6, 2012 -
Re: pain
This is really really good! It's super deep and i could definately feel the emotion as i read it. My only problem with it is the punctuation...or lack of... especially ...
Mar 6, 2012 -
Re: Risking Everything
Thanks for the review!
Mar 5, 2012 -
Re: The Secret Diary of a Criminal (Prologue)
I like this a lot, definately continue...except i think you should cut off the first few lines and just start with "In throught the window i climb..." because that's where ...
Feb 28, 2012 -
Re: Fill the Lines
Wow this is absolutely amazing! I love your writing style, simple but so detailed at the same time, and it's so well said what almost every writer goes through...I love ...
Feb 18, 2012 -
Re: The Unwritten Poem
Oh my gosh. This poem is aboslutely AMAZING! The rhyme and rhythm is REALLY good and i love the overal meaning! So many of the lines are amazingly deep and ...
Feb 18, 2012 -
Re: Why must I keep smiling?
I really liked you poem! It's very optimistic and perfect for bad days. Though i do have to admit a few of the lines are kind of cliche... another thing, ...
Feb 14, 2012