Published March 5, 2012
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This is really really good! It's super deep and i could definately feel the emotion as i read it. My only problem with it is the punctuation...or lack of... especially that last line bothers me without a comma after "there". Besides that though i absolutely loved it!
*second to last line, not last line, sorry...
Short but cool.