hayley10019

Hey. Really good story. I was really interested and hope to see more. I didn't notice anything really bad, and thought your writing was very good! One thing though. When ...

Hiya! Well I am in the imbetween. (: It was indeed a little list like... but still... It was VERRRRRRY creative... and cool! I liked how you put together each ...

Very interesting.... I will say it was.. very very weird.... and in a way a little creepy. But don't take that in offence. It was still very interesting... the story ...

I really liked this poem... It flowed well and had a great concept. If you wer bored, well done. And I would love to see what your writing is like ...

I liked it a lot. I cannot say I exactly relate... but I can say I at least 5% of the way realate. I liked the peice and how you ...

Hey. I see what you mean, I just don't see it as a poem. I see the emotions coming from the poem, and it's a very powerful tactic to use ...

Hey Ben, I really liked the story of the poem. I could connect wih it and it made a lot of sence. Your word choice was not over done, and ...