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haylesbales

  • Short Story » Realistic, Literature Re: Stencilled whiteness

    So so so good! You've done a wonderful job at capturing the emotion and predicament every writer goes through. Importantly for me, I really like the form of your writing, ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: Dancing Trees

    I really love this, it's so simple and succinct yet alludes to different concepts all dependent on the mood and context of the reader. I think you've done well to ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Fantasy Re: Insane Waltz

    Haha! Bloody brilliant! Something orginal and quirky. Your piece has real substance without being over emotive or cliche. Your words straddle the line of simple and alluding to meaning. I ...

    Jan 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The fill in the blank you forgot to fill

    I am going to be completely honest about your poem; I like it, it's wholesome and exploring an issue. Your imagery is very clever in places, evoking a secluded tone ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Paralleled-[chapter two]

    As a book writer myself I know how difficult it can be to get chapters right - the correct balance between dialogue, setting and substance. I have to say I ...

    Jan 10, 2014
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Wish

    I really like this, much to my surprise. It has so much potential to define some of life's shady areas. I find it intriguing and some of your word plays ...

    Dec 18, 2013


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