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I didn't think this was too surreal at all. I love that you made it all so simple as a butterfly and his innocence, and to give him so much ...

This is great. Poor Imp pretty much highlighted everything there, and I'm no English buff-whatever, so I won’t even try. The only thing I have to say is that it's ...

i liked this. usually sci-fi/fantasy writers are really serious, and the books are hardly a light read. your's has a little humour, and it's good humour too, well written. i ...

His fingertips entered dark red crevices where he had accidentally cut himself shaving. Trivial mistake, no biggie. Men did it frequently, particularly those who worked for high-tech corporate firms.

written well, good speech, but it seems like you're siding with the guy's point here, and it stuffs it up. I don't think you needed to be so gruesome in ...

Alcina: The Picture of Dorian Gray, definitely, but it can get a little messy. The Adventures of Huckelberry Finn would have to be my suggestion, especially for young readers. Dickens, ...

Yeah, I read these last year. Slightly frustrating leaving it there, it being so long before the other one, a feast for crows, I think...comes out. I heard it was ...

on the occasion i do read poetry, it's good to know the contents of this one gives justification to a rather working title. the end of the stanzas seem somewhat ...

I remember the first time I heard about this myth, was when I read Henry David Thoreau’s "Walden’s Pond." There was a quote that seemed very important, thought apparently not ...

i chose no. It didn't seem to flow so well, and think you need to add a little more description. "People yelling at tellers saying that they want their money.The ...

I had to read Shakespeare for school as well, English last year. Really, I'm not much of a fan. I'd much rather read a book by an author who gets ...

This was pretty good, but again, like I said on your [war] poem, it didn't flow very well. You need to concentrate on certian aspects, and don't try to fit ...

I really liked the idea behind this, but the issue of war isn't easy to address and still look affective. The problem was it didn't really flow very well. I ...

I have never read The Crow, I knew it was a comic or something, the fact I've seen the film and not read the story is somewhat embarrassing. Is it ...

it was really fast paced, i didn't know what was going on the whole time. it's not difficult to improve on this, just add some emotion to it, during speach ...