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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Sparks; prologue

    Holy goodness!! More, more, I need more!! This is an amazing prologue!! It pulled the reader in and sets up the story you are about to tell. The intro is ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Broken Ground

    First off, your avatar pic thing (or whatever it is) is amazing. I love that quote!! :D Anyway, I really liked this poem. The metaphors were good, and it helped ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Stranger

    I really liked this poem. I had to read it again after I read the ending. I have never really read a poem like this, and I loved it. The ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: alone

    Hello. I really liked this poem. I know what it feels like to be alone, and you described it almost perfectly. Just a few things I noticed : the other ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Page of Clay

    First off, thank you for reviewing my poem, World That I Create. :) This poem, I thought, was really creative. Your word choice was very olden times (I am not ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Letter To Her Lover

    I really liked this poem. It flowed and had a good rhyme scheme. One thing I noticed was this line : "You think I can't catch you lies." Either it ...

    Jul 6, 2011


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