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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Sparks; prologue

    Holy goodness!! More, more, I need more!! This is an amazing prologue!! It pulled the reader in and sets up the story you are about to tell. The intro is ...

    Jul 7, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Broken Ground

    First off, your avatar pic thing (or whatever it is) is amazing. I love that quote!! :D Anyway, I really liked this poem. The metaphors were good, and it helped ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Stranger

    I really liked this poem. I had to read it again after I read the ending. I have never really read a poem like this, and I loved it. The ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: alone

    Hello. I really liked this poem. I know what it feels like to be alone, and you described it almost perfectly. Just a few things I noticed : the other ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A Page of Clay

    First off, thank you for reviewing my poem, World That I Create. :) This poem, I thought, was really creative. Your word choice was very olden times (I am not ...

    Jul 6, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Letter To Her Lover

    I really liked this poem. It flowed and had a good rhyme scheme. One thing I noticed was this line : "You think I can't catch you lies." Either it ...

    Jul 6, 2011


You never really know how much of you takes residence in other people... We all exchange bits and pieces of ourselves with each other until we're big sparkly collages of everyone and everything we've ever loved
— GengarTheGhost