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Re: Sparks; prologue
Holy goodness!! More, more, I need more!! This is an amazing prologue!! It pulled the reader in and sets up the story you are about to tell. The intro is ...
Jul 7, 2011 -
Re: Broken Ground
First off, your avatar pic thing (or whatever it is) is amazing. I love that quote!! :D Anyway, I really liked this poem. The metaphors were good, and it helped ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Stranger
I really liked this poem. I had to read it again after I read the ending. I have never really read a poem like this, and I loved it. The ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: alone
Hello. I really liked this poem. I know what it feels like to be alone, and you described it almost perfectly. Just a few things I noticed : the other ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: A Page of Clay
First off, thank you for reviewing my poem, World That I Create. :) This poem, I thought, was really creative. Your word choice was very olden times (I am not ...
Jul 6, 2011 -
Re: Letter To Her Lover
I really liked this poem. It flowed and had a good rhyme scheme. One thing I noticed was this line : "You think I can't catch you lies." Either it ...
Jul 6, 2011
