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Re: Letter to the friend who dumped me because his new girlfriend told him to
You know what. This is relatable. Something very similar happened to me with my friends new girlfriend. Seen as I'm here to review. I LOVE IT. Your vocab is amazing, ...
Dec 7, 2022 -
Re: The Unbearable Weight of Social Norms
Evening! This is a really really really good short story I am in love! I love how it gives us an insight into a psychopath's mind. Your wording is amazing, ...
Dec 7, 2022 -
Re: an ode to absence
hi there! i love this! your wording is great and the meaning behind the poem is really deep. (if I'm on the right tracks) The only thing I would critique ...
Dec 7, 2022 -
Re: Thoughts That Ease My Mind
hey, love this! I love how you describe night-time and sleep, it's beautiful. seen as how you're describing something that often occurs you could maybe use 'in my sleep he ...
Dec 5, 2022 -
Re: Loneliness
I love this poem, it kinda hits deep haha. I love how you contrasted a physical symptom (empty stomach) with a psychological symptom (pain-filled heart) I don't really understand though ...
Dec 5, 2022 -
Re: 25 Charming Christmas tales
The first tale, had me hooked! Lots of descriptions, and lots of drama, and I loved the way you made it feel like I was in the characters head. Tale ...
Dec 3, 2022 -
Re: Samara’s story-Ghost house
This story is very gripping! It has the potential to be an amazing book! But I do feel as though to get the whole story, the audience needs to know ...
Dec 3, 2022